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Short Version |
I currently have two tasks in the group
project. The first task that I have is to |
To create a CGI script in Perl to process tutoring information sent over the web. Second, to conduct a survey on tutors’ opinions of strengths and weakness of the current enrollment system. |
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Diffuse. Wordy. Focus is on a person, not the work. |
Add Items Tabulation of survey results. Preparation of a table covering the following aspects: … , … , and … . Explicitly state varieties of tutoring information (e.g., "Scheduling, … , … etc.") |
Figure 11. Concise Writing Leads to Further Content